tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3309378450814545614.post697331439625548762..comments2015-07-02T00:53:10.605-07:00Comments on PLaCE Academic Writing Group A: Sunyunghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3309378450814545614.post-41893217379404371152015-06-28T13:02:22.072-07:002015-06-28T13:02:22.072-07:00Dora, I really enjoyed reading your work. A senten...Dora, I really enjoyed reading your work. A sentence cannot be a title. Thus, it is better to change your current title. A title should be a word or a phrase. <br /><br />Also, the topic sentence needs to be strong. If you use your current title (My family changed my life), it can be a good topic sentence. <br /><br />Overall, well-done!Sunyunghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.com