tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3309378450814545614.post3678850451684608400..comments2015-07-02T00:53:10.605-07:00Comments on PLaCE Academic Writing Group A: Sunyunghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3309378450814545614.post-35389659237606199672015-06-30T03:12:50.073-07:002015-06-30T03:12:50.073-07:00Fredy, thank you for uploading your research state...Fredy, thank you for uploading your research statement. It is well-written! I will give you some sample statements so that you can get a better idea of how to write an effective research statement. <br /><br />There are some language issues. For example,"Civil and Commercial Contracts are my field of research interest, as well as their effects." is your topic sentence. You can make it sound stronger by changing it to "My research interests focus on civil and commercial contracts as well as their effects on people's lives." Your sentences are grammatically correct, but do not sound strong enough. <br /><br />Sunyunghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08235319541612731609noreply@blogger.com